Falling for Wide-Eyed Credulity

Sweet smile streaks through blue
fresh and light, playing youth.
Standing afar, bearing hands helpless –
an observer of the unlikely.

Fresh light, playing youth
takes her by the hand to
an observer of the unlikely,
feeble-minded Miss.

Take her by the hand, to
escape from such a
feeble-mind and miss
not the stabbing pains.

She’d escape from such an
image readily bought, were it
not for the stabbing pains
Yet still, sweet smile streaks through blue.

Written for PTWWW Be Inspired Challenge #10




4 thoughts on “Falling for Wide-Eyed Credulity

  1. Brilliant is the word! Very Clever indeed! Thank you for trying this poetry form. You guys really excel at it! And thank you for the participation in the challenge. I love your writing, so thoughtful and profound.

    Love & Regards hun,

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